ORAL PRESENTATION: THE MOBILE PHONE

ORAL PRESENTATION CRITICS:

- Did you use any resources?
Yes: a power point,and I did use the paper to help me.
- Were the resources relevant and attractive?
I Think that yes, the power point was very interesting, and so attractive.

BODY LANGUAGE AND EYE CONTACT
- Did you look at your audience most of the time?
Not always..
- Did you read from your notes?
Maybe yes. A little.
- Did you do any gestures/movement to hold the attention of your audience?
Not any relevant one.

STRUCTURE
- Did you organize your ideas in order of importance?
Yes, I think yes.
- Did you use discourse markers to to make your ideas more clear?
Yes I did use.

CONTENT
- Did you introduce interesting NEW information to your audience?
Yes, I did. For example new vocabulary: "The mobile phone networks".
- Did you look up information/facts/ideas in the internet, books..?
Yes, I did. In the internet more.
- Was your information more superficial or more detailed, and original?
It was detailed.

LANGUAGE
- Did you check your grammar?(verbs, word order)
Yes I did.
- Did you use rich vocabulary looking up the dictionary?
(synonyms, new words, expressions..)
yes, something.
- Did you use sentence linkers?
(and, but, also, then ,because , however..)
- Did you use fillers?
(well, you know, for example..)
- Did you know how to pronounce all your words?
Yes, I did.
- Did you check the pronunciation with a dictionary, a classmate or the teacher?
With a classmate and a diccionary.
- Did you change your tone of voice or use a monotone tone all the time?
Not at all the time.
- Did you speed in a fluid continuum or with breaks and interruptions?
I spoke with a fluid speed and continuum but I did some breaks.
You are your teacher!
What mark did you get? I think that 6 or 7.

TRANSCRIPTION:

Presentació Oral

First I’m going to talk about the different types of mobile phone networks, then I talk the history of mobile phone,x then I talk the features of mobile phones and finally the best mobiles at the moment.

-Type of mobile phone networks

The analog mobile phone network (TMA), as its name suggests, performs communication using analog voice signal.

The digital mobile phone network, where communication is done by digital signals.

-History

Martin Cooper was a pioneer in this technology; it is considered "the father of cellular telephony" introduced the first radio telephone in 1973, the United States while he worked for Motorola;

-Features

All mobile phones have a number of features in common, but manufacturers also try to differentiate their own products by implementing additional functions to make them more attractive to consumers. This has led to great innovation in mobile phone development over the last 20 years.

-The best mobiles at the moment

This depends on each, but one of the best or is best is I ‘phone.

History of The mobile phone

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